Doubtless Bay camp is were there is a water-slide slippery hockey flying fox and a big playground.
When I was in the line I was watching the other people go down the water-slide I felt scared,nervous and a little bit excited. I was only scared because it is Northlands biggest water-slide.
When I was going down the water slide I said to myself "when is this going to end?" but it didn't end.
when I was going up the stairs I said to myself I am so doing that going because it was fun and funny.
Awesome Jorja - really love how you have organised your story into paragraphs and that you have correctly used different punctuation. It sounded so much like fun - you were very lucky to have such a wonderful day out. Remember to re-read your mahi to make sure that all of it makes sense and you have all your capitals in the right place. Your writing ROCKS!!!!!!
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