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Sunday, 19 June 2016
Who is it?
We are learning to make our writing more interesting by using precise words and adding detail. To practise this, we have been describing a buddy. Can you guess who it is?
Well done Jorja - I really enjoyed listening to your story at assembly. Your writing was very descriptive and I could guess who your buddy was by the way you were describing him. Tino Pai to mahi.
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Well done Jorja - I really enjoyed listening to your story at assembly. Your writing was very descriptive and I could guess who your buddy was by the way you were describing him. Tino Pai to mahi.
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